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The Spider and the Fly by ~Otachii:iconOtachii:



The Spider and the Fly

I know your lies will do me in,
But darling you lie so sweetly.
So string your web of tall tales and false hopes and tangle me within it to rob me of my innocence,
Descend upon me and let your fangs click with those disarming fibs.

This fabrication will undo me,
But baby you lie so sweetly.
So I'll expose my neck to the precious lies your fangs whisper with honey venom in my veins,
Sink your fangs deep within and keep me naive with your falsehoods.

I know what it is you want,
But dear I can't deny you.
So drain the life from my body and taint my blood with your poison in this fairy tale of ours,
Kill me quickly, kill me slowly, just lie to me sweetly as I die.

You be the spider and I'll be the fly.
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Author's Comments

I'm not sure if this will make sense to anyone other then me. But I wrote this because I'm lost and afraid... why? Well let's see if this made it clear.

Time About 10 minuets

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:iconxxlonesomedovexx:
That was lovely! I rly like it! The reference between the spider and the fly to you and your fears was very cool. :D

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it was a bad day. the sun exploded;
the earth roiled and tore entire cities asunder;
the bus in front of my car crashed violently and everyone died;
i ran out of green tea.


~ ohsostarryeyed :sun:
:iconotachii:
Thank you very much. ^_^

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☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼
Reality is for people without imagination.
:icontiredone:
"let your fangs click with those disarming fibs. " fantastic line. Good work, very good, thank you for this bitter sweet treat.
:iconotachii:
No problem and thank you so very much. ^_^ I'm glad you liked it.

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☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼
Reality is for people without imagination.
:iconeli-m:
I knew I'd finally get round to reading it! HAH!!That shows you TIMEE!! =p Gorgeous OIta-niisan, simply gorgeous!=p

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SasuHina < Best Couple In extistance
:iconxxlonesomedovexx:
ur welcome!

--
it was a bad day. the sun exploded;
the earth roiled and tore entire cities asunder;
the bus in front of my car crashed violently and everyone died;
i ran out of green tea.


~ ohsostarryeyed :sun:
:iconotachii:
Time is Eli-chan's b!tch! Stick it to time Eli-chan! :w00t: And thank you, that means a lot. ^_^

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☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼
Reality is for people without imagination.
:iconeli-m:
kukuk..i printed it off and shoed it too all my friends at school1 They really love it!

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SasuHina < Best Couple In extistance
:iconotachii:
Oh really? I'm so flattered! ^__^

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☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼♥☼
Reality is for people without imagination.

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